Creativity

[mAESDlo]

Give to here the fact that we we write, verses, history…. We will estimate each other, we learn the opinion of others about our creativity
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[kadrena_k]

Give.

[mAESDlo]

I look that everything something they are constrained by ........
It is agreeable, I will first be
***
The dark descended ominous
Evil above the earth is raised
War begins, it is revered
Between the light and the caustic dark





It appeared from under the hot earth
And by cry after wrapping to
He commands the forces of the dark
Descended to the earth the archangel
Sword reached, blade after baring
It attacks the forces furiously
It kills all those, who revived
They fell as before the field the ears





And starts fire it beside saint
After baring its snowy canine tooth
Its white wings were annealed
Not to raise to it more than the sword
But archangel was not put by the impure
The war still lasted for it
Cry, after issuing its dying in the hope
Which will hear the Most High draft
It fell already without the forces down the elbows
Fired wings after adding
And lightning based on the sky hammered
Driving ago satan
And only the wings very quietly of
By fire bright on the white of snow of ***
Wrote itself,
Estimate

[Omadeus]

of 10 balls of 10!!! ++++++

[onty13]

Well, in the first place, suffers and limps ., as I understand, not blank verses; therefore rhythm it is worthwhile to adhere to.
In the second place, cleanly there are no signs to . elementary points.
To pluses: glory to god, although there are no grammatical errors!
Subject: it is not new, and each of us wrote beyond similar themes (war of good and evil so forth), or at least it tried to write.
The dark was let go ! the pancake

[mAESDlo]

Helga33 it writes:
Well, in the first place, suffers and limps ., as I understand, not blank verses; therefore rhythm it is worthwhile to adhere to.
In the second place, cleanly there are no signs to . elementary points.
To pluses: glory to god, although there are no grammatical errors!
Subject: it is not new, and each of us wrote beyond similar themes (war of good and evil so forth), or at least it tried to write.
The dark was let go ! the pancake
Well for the sake of thanks at the point of the recommendations) ") I write as I can
(Addition)
Quotation:
Cry, after issuing its dying in the hope
There are signs of ) "

[onty13]

There are signs of ) "
punctuation marks
Write, also, be improved

[mAESDlo]

Quotation:
Write, also, be improved
Mandatorily) " A its creativity no one does wish to ???

[halyan6]

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і to іі
Not z by you.
to z by head?
і z .
People to by
to exchange.
To , і to і to mine?





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To to і,
іі to ,
To to ,
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To =
To …
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But TI? :.
day at once
Of down і - і our і is ,
Ї, ї not to gods - і.
Before diurnal of іі і - і,
To greenly і of і Of .
Roof of і to є by the hand of є beside і,
The odor of єї of і to it is quiet.
p' to the yak of beside і of і,
І not to і to dashingly.
of of ії, ії
So to of times to є by і to us.
TI of і to ї of і-ії,
of , і to і, hour.
To і , є of і of the aglet
Tree to . І TI of ї of є in the hand of ї.
і of of , were angered Wednesdays stitches.
Mie C of і of mi, to of і of і? :.
Hands і і of the squandered day
. І of і us to of і of іє,
Sky to - that our z by you і.





So mi of і to sleep є to ,
І наближається мить ненадовго прощатись,
To already to beside є to і…
. I to і do not wish to you .
to і I will not be of і - I think, to і for the criticism і .

[Omadeus]

rhyme limps (
(Addition)
and words are beautiful

[halyan6]

Denis writes:
rhyme limps (
(Addition)
and words are beautiful

that so, - those, by hour cannot і , to і, to , from і I soil і. to of 13 і I soil… - fates 4.

[Omadeus]

, but і not і, z to exchange not to )

[mAESDlo]

Bravo ......
From me individual thanks! Since all its creativity to lay out) "
(Addition)
Denis writes:
, but і not і, z to exchange not to )
But you did try? I also ever itself of .....
all the inspiration…. it found, simply sit down and begin, and it auto will be written
(Pravda I nick often of )

[Omadeus]

well shorter here, earlier I stayed.
As it is heavy to down.
As it is heavy to down…
Try after- be raised.
And tears were and ,
No one understands your .
Friends arrived -, pain.
Go away- remained again one…
Your misfortune- your and to seamount,
Try force- conquer…
In each there are before the life many obstacles.
And all we once fell down.
But respect itself, others you be ready,
in order again to fall and be raised to again upwards!
For you
You eclipsed my heart,
You eclipsed my soul,
You eclipsed my tears,
Visors are my still dreams.
For you you I will strip star,
For you I will erase sky,
For you it is gone out tear,
What spilled two somewhere.

[halyan6]

Denis writes:
For you
You eclipsed my heart,
You eclipsed my soul,
You eclipsed my tears,
Visors are my still dreams.
For you you I will strip star,
For you I will erase sky,
For you it is gone out tear,
What spilled two somewhere.
it is sad. Tsay і is similar down .
Denis writes:
As it is heavy to down…
Try after- be raised.
And tears were and ,
No one understands your .
Friends arrived -, pain.
Go away- remained again one…
Your misfortune- your and to seamount,
Try force- conquer…
In each there are before the life many obstacles.
And all we once fell down.
But respect itself, others you be ready,
in order again to fall and be raised to again upwards!
and C is similar down і. true, the rhythm of to . to C to of .
to to of .
by і I will add before to і of і, de і і I converge the subjects:
To Land
You tied me down yourself
By laws of attraction.
Life is the my- millionth round
To the exhaustion.
You for me rye,
By tender concern muffling up.
You through the flesh pass trembling,
Quietly paths confusing.
You tied me, the earth,
And I on you walk,
Tender loving,





But if I fall suddenly based on the skies,
of what it wished,
That is you- my sole loyal friend,
That signs the decomposed body.
Thus, we with you always two together.
Desiring to now and then part,
We song on life one will eat up,
On how through the pain to laugh…

[Omadeus]

I so ..... feel, that we with you will go to teach how to construct rhyme)

[halyan6]

Denis writes:
we with you will go to teach how to construct rhyme)
and can ?
and if , then not of Rome - to smut log in іі. down і of , of ї of ії - rhythm. і to єі.

[mAESDlo]

It is normal, from us no one not he becomes writer (well or it is assembled)
To measure we zh not of , we only learn .....
Denis and you to , in you all is received
Give increasingly more actively!
It is here even from me:
Time runs as if the sand
I fall beside hell
Of lives route for me was high
To me they will not be returned
I lose itself inside
The blood congeals before me
See now configuration I by your
I remain before the silence
As soon as see eyes I your
The blood again seethes before me





But death will stop the love
***
This hatred moves as far as me
I am moved for the sake of vengeance, this I there is
Let I no longer with you
You no longer believe before me
I cannot go away
Keep me before that peace only you
The emergence I never will find….
Indeed in me demon before the blood….
You forget me
Indeed you live the life of your
Do not lose, only, itself
When you will cry on the grave of my
***





I do not know, as to me to be
How to save to me its feelings?
How to me this to forget?
Leaving above the back beside the problems
I continue to live
But I, know that the heart will not be able
This all, to forever forget
(devoted Moran)

[halyan6]

This hatred moves as far as me
I am moved for the sake of vengeance, this I there is
Let I no longer with you
You no longer believe before me
I cannot go away
Keep me before that peace only you
The emergence I never will find….
Indeed in me demon before the blood….
You forget me
Indeed you live the life of your
Do not lose, only, itself
When you will cry on the grave of my
відчувається вплив відповідної музики...

[mAESDlo]

it writes:
відчувається вплив відповідної музики...
Well…. for to the exchange of C і of і of
(Addition)
Denis removed the statement of user
Reason:
It eliminated, not because you wrote better me, but because here we lay out our creativity, and we do not edit the creativity of others
Give to lay out only your creativity. statements will be removed
.: We have a law about the copyrights

[Omadeus]

I did not edit, I to you did do a review besides the verse, you did not comprehend that I did do?
(Addition)
even if you write before the theme creativity, then if you please understand, that, where and as dully do not eliminate statement…

[mAESDlo]

Denis writes:
I did not edit, I to you did do a review besides the verse, you did not comprehend that I did do?
(Addition)
even if you write before the theme creativity, then if you please understand, that, where and as dully do not eliminate statement…
I understand that I I make, simply I theme not for the reviews created
Give let us create the individual theme “of the review of the creativity of ”

[Omadeus]

GIVE, simply I thought that into this theme enters the criticism.

[halyan6]

і of і
About TI tomorrow of to і?
of the tax of є?
To whom TI of і of to і,
beside і to of іє?
І de TI of to ,
beside і hatred є…
І C z by itself itself ,
Before to b' to є to of є.
thus it did become? - to itself є.





І TI to to of іє.
That cabbage soup not і, “stop”!
TI of і turn road,
But on і, to і to .
І I will pray above to you to god,
That і entire і of TI.

[Demis]

it is good

[Mayonka]

Denis writes:
it is good
the of і of і. it is simple if down і boules by , then of і authorship і

[Demis]

by the way yes, I noted this.

[Mayonka]

it writes:
Life and death so it is close…
Life and death so it is rapid…





Only love one is immortal.
You live, I die
Do not be bored, I will be number!
You live, and I around the sky





We scraped our hands





Indeed love is indeed immortal!
Profit, and as you will get tired,
Come. Where I, you know.
(Addition)
Week passes,
Another passes,
What to make with itself,
I completely do not know.
Before the love I to you did not wish to acknowledge,
Indeed you spoke: “Not to be encountered!”
I swam on by , and he was not isolated,
and we here discontinued with you to associate.
To me so it is heavy,
I began to become an alcoholic.
To you ,
You not to associate.
Based on the morning I based on the hangover





Which will be another
I will associate with it.
But heart does not wish,
It begins to kick.
To you it pulls him,
to
Let the life all and the pain of ,
before the breast, forever .
And let number will be another,
but remember one, for me you native.
(Addition)
Good-bye love,
Crazy boredom,
I will see again,
For the heart there will be the flour.
Why it fell on route my,
Why it made it possible down itself to run next.
Assume that better was this sleep,
Than to before the life with the ideal
to of heart to me not to overcome
and all to forget, I fear, to me life it will be little.
now no one will be able to help us,
and the life of by machine .
(Addition)
And is sad, it is difficult, it is lonely!
You I love, love you one.
To me without you it is so cold and it is nauseating,
Surely I will die without the eyes of your.





But to to suffice.
And at night to weeping and to itself a little,
But the fact that it did, blindy presses breast.
I will see to again and heart by the blood,
By brains soul not to already deceive.
I live to itself, to the health
and not floodplain, why then to live….
(Addition)
How to the meaning of love?
Hardly who response.
And not of yes, there are no ?





of word is incomprehensible.





And to transmit its inside
Well is simple .
(Addition)
What to make it possible itself to love,
of its feeling without the caution.
He wishes by all how it can give presents,
And are great now and then its gifts.
But grow heavy to make it necessary not to love,
Not to give to be fallen in love in order not to confuse,
About by in order the possibility to give,
to change the mind and so more not to make fall in love

[Mayonka]

Those, to not to , but to
“To і і of і”?
Not to і, I do not wish, I will not be!
Untruth! De to і і?
To of і of і I will not forget…
But Palm' є in і to ,
і of of ?
To , TI to exchange to to
After releasing in of і?!
“One і of ” - to ,
But speaking, of of …
The C lie?!!! Down і,





І everything is so burning, і culturally,
“і not one to ”,
That are everything to є confused
І before the exchange the hour of , and for to you to .





in to exchange cabbage soup not z' ї ,
Give of іі, і:
Of not to in it is calm nights і days?!.
І is that not of і, but TI C of ' I burning,
But to і to the fever і of і of word…
I so і to і, TI loving.
But TI . І of became fateful.
І I C of і, to ,
That TI not of of і to і,
: і in breasts so to pinch!
To zh of є word to TI.





і telephone, , of і,
So ! It is not easily і terrible. To і
beside і of of і of і.
It is there dark, is cold, of pit,
І нагорі лунають всі пісні твої.
і of і to down і by ,
І of -і p' to її.
That everything not is so unclean, і! Be tired of waiting,
I - not “one і of ”, while I - є,
Хто із коханням житиме завжди...
to exchange… That I to of і, I not …

[Crotcx]

2Mayunka
і post - is strong, to
Mayunka it writes:
It is there dark, is cold, of pit,
І нагорі лунають всі пісні твої.
і of і to down і by ,
І of -і p' to її.
of і to є, of і of і of to the tomcat of і і!
Rhythm of , in і є of і:
Mayunka it writes:
That are everything to є confused
І before the exchange the hour of , and for to you to .
here to і to і “”. І!
Mayunka it writes:
І of became fateful.
This word of є before ukr of і!

[Mayonka]

Crutch it writes:
here to і to і “”. І!
. C is precise.
Crutch it writes:
This word of є before ukr of і!
є. to і in The - to іє
Crutch it writes:
Mayunka it writes: It is there dark, is cold, of pit,
І нагорі лунають всі пісні твої.
і of і to down і by ,
І of -і p' to її.
of і to є, of і of і of to the tomcat of і і!
she wrote above і
criticize to exchange, the people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
і growth by the rates:
І і in і to ,
But I to of і by the willows
Down і of lake, down .
Yak good, before the exchange of є of ,
of і the asphalt of і і weeping,
But I to to of і of і,
І of the crows of the hour of і to hour to .
I to yak to of є to ,
і of і in і of .
І of of і, to to і,
In water of і to the thread of .
І I to і, all C for to the exchange:





І is cutaneous blade of grass is here blessed,
To beside і I swear to .
І yak to to not can?
І yak not to її Of ?





I z by і beside і will pass to і!

[Mayonka]

і of іі
Going off the road that way
Couldn' t of even be of better of now.
The I' d of ask of you of not to of leave, to stay,
But I don' t of even of imagine of how.
The I' ve lost of the of chance, pressed of you of too of much,
Wanting of from of you of what I couldn' t of give,
Counting of your of every of smile and touch…
Now of the I' ve got a of simple of word of for of you: `forgive'.
Loosing of the of gravity, space of connection
The I' d of give up my former of point of of view
Only to see your forbidden reaction
If you of knew of that of the I' m of still of loving of you.
Walking of with of you, even of like of friends,
Makes Me of happiest of being of of all.
To braethe of the of same of air, you do of till of the of evening of ends,
And goging of back of home of waiting of for of your of rare of next of call.

[Mayonka]

Mayunka of ?
surely, that is of mine

[Mayonka of і]

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